Deer Prints in the Snow Poem


I see their prints in snow

smaller than our hands

but their bodies

large, mighty, graceful

destroying trucks

with final breaths,

sharp bones shattering glass

blood coating heated metal

dashboard crumpling in

towards our boots

the lasting impact of a dead animal


2 responses to “Deer Prints in the Snow Poem”

  1. It’s very effective to start so quietly with the snow prints, then transition through body size. Then you chose very evocative images in the second half. Somehow the moment of impact is frozen in time

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